I liked the transition from your neat and tidy look to the untucked shirt and the pen behind your ear. I get everything except the last image. Each image shows you digging in a little more to heavy homework but then everything is gone. Are you pushing in the chair because you're finished? The transition seemed a little abrupt. If I were a civil engineering student my ending would be showing the next load of homework that is always around the corner... never ending.
I don't get the ending.
ReplyDeleteAs a former Chemical Engineering Major- I get it. Poor guy.
ReplyDeleteI liked the transition from your neat and tidy look to the untucked shirt and the pen behind your ear. I get everything except the last image. Each image shows you digging in a little more to heavy homework but then everything is gone. Are you pushing in the chair because you're finished? The transition seemed a little abrupt. If I were a civil engineering student my ending would be showing the next load of homework that is always around the corner... never ending.
ReplyDeleteThe transitions between the scenes of the story really work. Nice job!
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