I think you did a great job on the second half of the story. I think a few of the first pictures could have had some more going on in the picutres to help the story have more meaning but they're great pictures.
Haha! This is a great story that is easily communicated through a few photos. I love the ending photo. I think it was smart not to show the face because it focuses on the action that is being done.
I think you did a great job on the second half of the story. I think a few of the first pictures could have had some more going on in the picutres to help the story have more meaning but they're great pictures.
ReplyDeleteI did this all the time when I was living at home. Love it.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great "Ferris" story - I like way you showed his adventure as well.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great "Ferris" story - I like way you showed his adventure as well.
ReplyDeleteI like the thought behind it, we all did it as kids so it relateable
ReplyDeleteHaha! This is a great story that is easily communicated through a few photos. I love the ending photo. I think it was smart not to show the face because it focuses on the action that is being done.
ReplyDeleteI love this series because there is so much action in it. The pictures feel like their in motion and give a sense of movement to everything
ReplyDeleteI love this series because there is so much action in it. The pictures feel like their in motion and give a sense of movement to everything
ReplyDeleteOlivia as a mom, for sure.
ReplyDeleteOlivia as a mom, for sure.
ReplyDeleteHaha wow this is an intense action-packed story. I love it.
ReplyDeleteHaha wow this is an intense action-packed story. I love it.
ReplyDeletefun story- I think a little more attention to detail (no blurry photos, composition) would add to the piece
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