Fantastic story. I think the first shots were great at explaining the many things that we all know we have to do, but then finishing the story with the idea that sometimes we just have to do what we want. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
I like how we can all relate to this. Sometimes we are just too overwhelmed and it is time to peace out. I feel the shots could be improved, a little more artistic.
love the last two pictures. I think the first pictures could have been improved. It took me a little while to figure out what the story was. It looked kind of like a countdown to a huge hike or race or something since the numbers are what you are drawn to first. If it was emphasized a little more in the first picture everything would have made a lot more sense the first time. It's a great story though once you get the meaning. We really all can relate
I love this piece because it keeps you in suspense a little. You can see it's obviously a countdown but you don't know to what until the very end. I think it's a great way to keep the viewers' interest.
Fantastic story. I think the first shots were great at explaining the many things that we all know we have to do, but then finishing the story with the idea that sometimes we just have to do what we want. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
ReplyDeleteI like how we can all relate to this. Sometimes we are just too overwhelmed and it is time to peace out. I feel the shots could be improved, a little more artistic.
ReplyDeletelove the last two pictures. I think the first pictures could have been improved. It took me a little while to figure out what the story was. It looked kind of like a countdown to a huge hike or race or something since the numbers are what you are drawn to first. If it was emphasized a little more in the first picture everything would have made a lot more sense the first time. It's a great story though once you get the meaning. We really all can relate
ReplyDeleteI like the whole idea behind the story and how we could tell you we're counting down to something
ReplyDeleteI love this piece because it keeps you in suspense a little. You can see it's obviously a countdown but you don't know to what until the very end. I think it's a great way to keep the viewers' interest.
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