Oh thank goodness. You had me at hello Cris, and kept me till the end. I expected blood and bones. Tears in my eyes were forming, and then oh what a relief. I share the same relief as your character, ohhhhhhhhh boy.
This is a good story. It is amazing what a few pictures can illustrate in the mind of the viewer. You did a great job capturing the climatic scenes, giving us enough detail to connect the pieces of the story together.
Oh thank goodness. You had me at hello Cris, and kept me till the end. I expected blood and bones. Tears in my eyes were forming, and then oh what a relief. I share the same relief as your character, ohhhhhhhhh boy.
ReplyDeleteI love how the by-stander tells a lot of the story. His expressions are really entertaining!
ReplyDeleteI loved this story! The facial expressions really tell it well and i was totally expecting a terrible fall!
ReplyDeleteThis is a good story. It is amazing what a few pictures can illustrate in the mind of the viewer. You did a great job capturing the climatic scenes, giving us enough detail to connect the pieces of the story together.
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